冰心《雨雪时候的星辰》(中英文互译).docx

冰心雨雪时候的星辰(中英文互译)冰心(19001999),原名谢婉莹,福建长乐人。中国诗人,现代作家，翻译家，儿童文学作家，社会活动家，散文家。雨雪时候的星辰是冰心早期的抒情散文，文章赞美自然、想象精细、文笔清新，充满诗情画意。雨雪时候的星辰1StarsonaSnowyNight寒暑表降到冰点下十八度的时候，我们也是在廊下睡觉。每夜最熟识的就是天上的星辰了。也不过只是点点闪烁的光明,而相看惯了，偶然不见,也有些想望与无聊0。Thethermometerhaddroppedto18degreesbe1owzero,butwesti11chosetos1eepintheporchasusua1.Intheevening,themostfami1iarsighttomewou1dbestarsinthesky.Thoughtheywereameresprink1eoftwink1ingdots,yetIhadbecomesoaccustomedtothemthattheiroccasiona1absencewou1dbringme1one1inessandennui.连夜雨雪，一点儿星光都看不见引。荷和我4拥衾对坐，在廊子的两角，遥遥谈话。Ithadbeensnowinga11night,notasing1estarinsight.MyroommateandI,eachwrappedinaqui1t,wereseatedfarapartinadifferentcorneroftheporch,facingeachotherandchattingaway.荷指着说5:“你看维纳斯(Venus)升起来了！"我抬头望时6,却是山路转折处刀的路灯。我怡然一笑，也指着对山的一星灯火说："那边是丘比特(JUPiter)呢！"Sheexc1aimedpointingtosomethingafar;"1ook,Venusisrising!”I1ookedupandsawnothingbuta1amproundthebendinamountainpath.Ibeamedandsaidpointingtoatiny1amp1ightontheoppositemountain,"It'sJupiteroverthere!w愈指愈多。松林中射来零乱的风灯，都成了满天星宿。真的，雪花隙里，看不出天空和森林的界限，将繁灯当作繁星，简直是抵得过8。Moreandmore1ightscameintosightaswekeptpointinghereandthere.1ightsfromhurricane1ampsf1ickeringaboutinthepineforestcreatedthesceneofastar-studdedsky.Withthedistinctionbetweenskyandforestobscuredbysnowf1akes,thenumerous1amp-1ightsnoweasi1ypassedforasmanystars.一念至诚的将假作真，灯光似乎都从地上飘起。这幻成的星光，都不移动，不必半夜梦醒时,再去追寻它们的位置。Comp1ete1y1ostinmake-be1ievewor1d,Iseemedtoseea11the1amp1ightsdriftingfromtheground.Withthei11usorystarshangingsti11overhead,IwassparedtheeffortoftracingtheirpositionswhenIwokeupfrommydreamsinthedeadofnight.于是雨雪寂寞之夜，也有了慰安了。ThusIfoundconso1ationevenona1one1ysnowynight.注释：1题目雨雪时候的星辰译为StarsonaSnowyNighto雨雪”作下雪"解，"雨在此是动词,读音为yu。2"无聊"译为ennui,是英语常用文学语言,意即afee1ingofboredomcausedbya1ackofexcitementoractivityo3"一点儿星光都看不见"译为notasing1estarinsight,是句中独立主格，和notasing1estarbeinginsight同。又译文用s押头韵，night和sight押脚韵，有音韵美。4"荷和我译为MyroommateandI,其中用Myroommate（同寝之友）代替专门名词He（荷），以免外国读者把He误解为男性第三人称的代词。5"荷指着说"不宜死译为Shesaidpointingherfingerat,因为英语topointonezsfingerat有"指责”的含义。6“我抬头望时"不宜逐字死译为Iraisedmyheadtotakea1ooko译为I1ookedup即可。7"山路转折处译为roundthebendinamountainpatho注意bend后面跟介词in,属于习惯用法。8"将繁灯当作繁星,简直是抵得过"译为thenumerous1amp1ightsnoweasi1ypassedforasmanystars,其中短语topassfor的意思是"被看作""被当作等。