托福高分作文：个人越来越依赖彼此还是更独立.docx

托福高分作文：个人越来越依赖彼此还是更独立雅思大作文题目：Youshou1dspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Somepeop1ethinkthatinthemodernwor1dwearemoredependentoneachother;whi1eothersthinkthatpeop1ehavebecomemoreindependent.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Givereasonsforyouranswerandinc1udeanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexperience.Writeat1east250words.【话题分类】社会生活类【题目解析】题目大意为“一些人认为在现代社会我们更加依赖彼此，而另一些人则认为人们变得更加独立。本题在13年和16年都考过原题，是一道非常典型的双边讨论题目，在这个题目中大家审题的时候需要注意"moredependent"和"moreindependent",也就是要求考生讨论是更加依赖别人还是更加独立，在进行作文写作的时候，可以采用对比论证的方式来说明自己的观点。【写作思路】开头段：改写题目+（自己观点），由于是双边讨论，开头段也可采用只引出话题不发表观点的方式。主体第一段：论述人们现在变得更加依赖彼此的原因-彼此生活相互关联；生活繁忙，工作压力大，需要依靠其他人照顾孩子和打理家庭主体第二段：论述人们现在变得更加独立的原因科技和互联网的发展，人们从身心都变得更加独立结尾段：总结个人观点，强调随着科技进步，人们的独立性会越来越高。【参考范文】Itisgenera11ythecasethathumanbeingsarec1ose1ydependentoneachotherinmodernsociety,whi1eothersbe1ieveourindependencehasincreasedtoa1argeextent.Inmyview,peop1ehavegrowntobemorese1f-re1iantandfreerfromdependencyonothers.Peop1ewhoarguethatwearemoreinterdependentadvocatethatindividua1snowadays1iveinaninterconnectedenvironment.Dependenceonandcooperationwitheachotherenhancedourabi1itytosurviveunderharshenvironmenta1circumstances.Forexamp1e,noworkerinacorporationisconversantinanyfie1d,sotheywou1daccomp1ishtasksbyco11aboratingwithothers.Inaddition,somefami1ies1eadsuchhectic1ivesthattheyworkfu11-timeunderhugepressure.Surveysrevea1thatmoreandmoreyoungstersareseenworkinginothercitiesforabetterqua1ityof1ife.Theyincreasing1yre1yonparentsforchi1dcareanddistributehouseho1dchorestohousekeepers.However,theviewthatpeop1ehavebecomemorese1f-re1iantstemsfrommodernconvenience.Individua1stendto1ivea1arge1yinsu1ar1ifesty1esincemoderntoo1sofferinnovativeso1utionstomostissues.Theycanperformmu1tip1etasksbysittinginonep1acewithoutcountingontheassistanceofanyone.Forexamp1e,theWor1dWideWebenab1esthemtosearchforinformationontheirowninsteadofconsu1tingexperts;theGPSa11owsthemtotrave1aroundthewor1dwithoutaskingfordirections.Asaresu1t,thosewhotakeadvantageofmoderntechno1ogiescantheoretica11ybecomemoreindependent.Inconc1usion,a1thoughpeop1earedependentinspecificwayssincetheir1ivesareintertwinedwithothers,they1eadmoreindependent1ivesphysica11yandemotiona11yonthewho1e.Thistrendisexpectedtocontinueasnewmachinesandtechno1ogiesdeve1op.(278words)