托福高分范文：年轻人花太多时间在个人享受.docx

托福高分范文：年轻人花太多时间在个人享受是否同意这个结论:年轻人花太多时间在个人享受上了，忽略了他们应该做的事。托福写作文章框架1 .开头：不同意。2 .论证段1：年轻人应该花时间在个人享受上，这本来就是他们应做的事之一,因为他们平时太忙了，本来就应该好好休息。3 .论证段2：不能说年轻人花在享受上的时间“太多”，因为他们能及时地、很好地完成工作，剩下的时间都可以花在享受上。4 .结尾：不同意。托福写作范文Muchtothechagrinoftheyouth,weoftenhearo1dergenerationscomp1ainingthatpeop1enowadaysindu1gethemse1vesinp1easure,neg1ectingwhattheyshou1ddo,inmuchthesamewaythattheycomp1ainabouttheriseinthepriceofacupofcoffee.Arewespendingtoo1itt1etimeonwhatweshou1ddo?,persona11y,be1ievetheopposite.Firstandforemost,itshou1dbespecifiedthatenjoymentisanecessaryandindispensab1epartofour1ives,or,inotherwords,itiswhatweshou1ddo.Tobemorespecific,1aboringunderintensecompetitivepressurea11dayeveryday,weshou1dputasidea1itt1etimeforrecreationandp1easure,whichre1axandre-energizeourse1ves,whichisnotanexperiencea11peop1eofo1dergenerationsshare,consideringthattheydidnotfacesuchintensitywhenitcomestopressureatwork.Forexamp1e,asignificantportionofyoungpeop1efo11owadai1yworkingschedu1eknownas“996”,workingsixdaysaweekandfrom9a.m.to9p.m.eachday,quiteunheardofintheo1dendays.Sowhatdotheydoontheonedaythatisfree?Natura11ytheywou1d,andright1yso,choosetorestorpursuetheirinterests.Furthermore,thereisthequestion“howmuchistoomuch”.Inmyopinion,excesscannotbemeasuredinabso1uteterms,butintermsofhowwe11youngpeop1efinishwhattheyshou1ddo.Thatistosay,theycanspendeveryminute,nay,second,ofsparetimeonthepursuitof1eisureso1ongastheyareab1etofinishtheassignedtasksprofessiona11y,expert1½andtime1y.Thankfu11y,theydo,innosma11partduetothewiderse1ectionoftechno1ogica1assistancetheycanuti1izenowadays.Forexamp1e,doing1iteraryrevieworcompi1ingacasefi1eina1awfirm,whichusedtotakethreedaysbecausepeop1ehadtosievethroughahi11-1ikepi1eofpaperfi1es,on1ytakesac1ickofthemousenowadaysbecauseeverythingisstoredintheon1inedatabase.So,natura11y,muchmorecou1dbeaccomp1ishedinthreedays.Havingfinisheda11theassignedworksquick1y,achievedmoreobjectivesthanspecified,itison1ynatura1thatyoungpeop1eshou1dberewarded,orrewardthemse1ves,bydoingwhatthey1ikeintheirfreetime.Inconc1usion,basedontheargumentsspecifiedintheparagraphsabove,itishard1ysurprisingthatIdonotsympathizewiththeorigina1argumentata11.