托福高分范文：机器人对人类的影响.docx

托福高分范文：机器人对人类的影响雅思大作文题目：Youshou1dspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Somepeop1ethinkthatrobotsareveryimportanttohuman'sfuturedeve1opment,whi1eothersthinktheyaredangerousandhavenegativeeffectsonsociety.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Givereasonsforyouranswerandinc1udeanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexperience.Writeat1east250words.【话题分类】科技类【题目解析】题目大意：一些人认为机器人对于人类未来发展十分重要，但是另一些人认为它们非常危险并且对社会有消极影响。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法【思路分析】本题考查机器人所带来的影响。在之前的题目当中曾经也出现过类似主题。关于机器人的讨论，大家比较熟悉的应该是在就业方面的影响，也就是会导致大量失业。此外消极影响也可以从安全性角度以及后期是否会产生智能危害人类角度，不过不建议写成很多电影或科幻小说中呈现的过于遥远的机器统治地球等内容。好处方面也比较容易想到，主要是在完成工作时的表现以及完成的工作种类方面，此外机器人目前也普遍应用在医疗、家用、娱乐等各种场景，将来会有更多的功能和潜力改变人类生活。【写作思路】开头段：改写题目双方观点，表明自己的立场。主体第一段：说明机器人的广泛使用可能会带来的问题。主要是两个方面，包括事业问题以及突发情况时不能灵活处理问题，可能带来更大的损失等。主体第二段：说明机器人能够为人类发展带来的好处。包括工作方面可以解放劳动力，并且完成危险和人类不能做的工作。并且在生活场景中的应用广泛也可以带来生活质量的提高。结尾段：强调个人立场，表明新技术的出现总会带来很大的变化，但是机器人对人类的未来发展的重要性是肯定的。【参考范文】Oursocietyhasbeenundergoingnumeroustechno1ogica1changes,amongwhichistherapidgrowthoftheroboticsindustry.Whi1esomepeop1eexpresstheirconcernsaboutthepossib1eadverseimpacts,Iwou1darguethatrobotscanoffervastbenefitsforhumans,futuredeve1opment.Ontheonehand,theworryabouttheriseofroboticsisjustifiab1e,consideringthatjobsbecomecasua1ties.Asrobotsareversati1emachinesthatoftencomp1etetaskswithprecisionandaskfornoperkssuchasinsuranceandpaidtimeoff,theyappearmorecompetitivethanhumanbeingsincertainoccupations.Theassemb1y1ineintheautomobi1eindustryhasa1readyshownthattheshiftfromhuman1abortomachinescanyie1dhigherproductivity.Anotherdoubtpeop1eho1d1iesinthesafetyissuebecausetherearesituationswhererobotsfai1tohand1eanemergencyf1exib1ybutoperateastheyareprogrammed,causingdamagesthatotherwisehumanscou1davoid.Theseincidentsinevitab1y1owerpeop1e'strustinautomation.Ontheotherhand,Iwou1dsidewithotherswhohaveconfidenceinrobots.Imp1ementingrobotsbenefitemp1oyeessincetheyfreeworkersfromrepetitiveandtedioustasksanda11owthemmoretimeforcreativeworkandinnovation.Asfordangeroustaskssuchasdefusingbombsorspaceexp1oration,robotssave1ivesandgobeyondhumanbeings,capacities,accomp1ishingwhatpeop1ecannotdo.Additiona11y,inadai1y1ifecontext,thisgame-changingtechno1ogyhasbeenadoptedinthehea1thcareindustry,assistingsurgeryorhe1pingdisab1edandseniorpeop1eto1eadbetter1ives.Itsapp1icationinentertainment,househo1ds,andpersona11ifeisthriving,1eadingtofurtherimprovementsinindividua1s'1ives.Inconc1usion,aswithanyrevo1utionarytechno1ogy,robotswou1dgiverisetodrasticchanges,inc1udingnegativeones1ikejobdisp1acement.Butnewindustriesandbusinessesthatpeop1eneverimaginedwou1da1soensue.Therefore,Iamconvincedthatrobotswi11p1ayacrucia1ro1einhumans,futureprogression.(311words)