高分推荐信（人）.docx

应用文高分突破系列一推荐信（人）假如你是李华,你们学校的外教MrJames想找一个人教他8岁的儿子中文。请你写信推荐你的朋友王明,内容包括：1.写信目的2推荐理由。注意:1.词数80左右2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。审题五问 一问类型:推荐信-推荐他人二问人称:第三人称为主三问时态：一般现在时四问要点:写信目的,推荐内容五问结构（遵循交际原则;表达具有逻辑性）：Para.l:问侯+写信背景+写信目的（LeanIing/knowing that.;Pm writing to recommend.） Para 2,推荐理由:个性特质;语言水平;经验能力（With的复合结构,定语从句,非谓语,同位语）Para 3:希望+期待（take.into consideration;look forward to your reply）第一段:写作背景+写作目的1 .LearningZKnowing that you are looking for/eager to find a Chinese tutor for your sonaged 8, I'm writing to recommend Wang Ming , one of my friends,to you.,1.1 nformed that you have trouble in looking for a Chinese teacher for your 8-year-old son,I am writing to recommend my friend Wang Ming.第二段:推荐理由个性特质先天be born/blessed/endowed/equipped with a sense OfhUmor（幽默）warmhospitality （好客）/amiable （和蔼可亲的）and dynamic personality （character）be bom as an extrovert （性格夕卜向者）（2） ,有耐心;有爱心amiable / responsible character /humorous and patientextend （伸出）/render （给予;提供）a helping hand（3） .与人友好相处get along well with.build a good relationship with.语言水平1 .描述能力：a good sense of /an exceptional command of both my mother tongueand English gain/ achieve remarkable linguistic competencebe exposed to authentic （地道的）English background / bilingual（双语的）atmosphere / environment for agesbe skilled at be excellent in 擅长于（2）作用效果：break down/remove/eliminate （消 除）language barrier经验能力with abundant (ample) relevant (tutor-related) experience accumulatedprevious engagement (involvement) in 参与 several voluntary activities both at home and abroad推荐的理由部分可以采纳多种结构，常用的有“总-分”结构和并列结构。 句式常采用的有定语从句，With的复合结构，非谓语和同位语等等.句式提高1 .He is highly proficient in both Chinese and EnglishHe is equipped with a responsible character>(Not only is he highly proficient in both Chinese and English,but is equipped with a responsible character. ) Not only.but also.倒装 + 并歹IJ2 .He always gets along well with kids.He has humorous and patient character>(With humorous and patient character, he always gets along well with kids.) With短语和高级词汇3 .He has abundant experience as well as subtle tutoring techniques.It qualifies him to help your son make progress in Chinese learning.>(He has abundant experience as well as SlIbtIe(巧妙的)tutoring techniques,which qualies him to help your son make progress in Chinese learning. )which引导的非限制性定语从句4 .He has been exposed to authentic English background for ages so he has a command of English and Chinese .It will be of great help in tutoring your son.(Exposed to an authentic English background for ages, he has a command of English and Chinese5Which will be of great help in tutoring your son.)which引导的非限制性定语从句5 .He has fluency in Chinese and abundant experience in tutoring kids. He will definitely navigate your son into a fantastic Chinese world by teaching necessary grammars and pronunciations.>(With fluency in Chinese and abundant experience in tutoring kids, he will definitely IlaVigate(导航T引导)your son into a fantastic Chinese world by teaching necessary grammars and pronunciations.)with的复合结构6 .He has abundant previous experiences and subtle techniques for tutoring.It qualifies him to help your son make steady progress.(His abundant previous experiences and subtle techniques for tutoring qualies him to help your son make steady progress.)无灵主语第三段表达希望1 .Hopefully, my recommendation can be taken into your consideration.1.1 do hope you can take Wang Ming into consideration and believe your son will enjoy Chinese learning with him.3.1 would be appreciative if you could consider my recommendation favorably.4.Itd be grateful if you could consider my recommendation.参考范文1Dear Mr. James,Learning that you are looking for someone to teach your 8-year-old son Chinese, I am writing to recommend my friend,Wang Ming.Discipline and diligence makes Wang Ming one of the top students in the class. Being good at Chinese and English, he once won the first place in our school speech competition.Besides, he is easy-going and willing to help others. In short, I am convinced that he is an ideal candidate. 分一-总结构I would be appreciative if you could consider my recommendation favorably.Yours,Li Hua 参考范文2Dear Mr. James9Learning that you are looking for a Chinese tutor for your son, m writing to recommend my friend ,Wang Ming, to you.I'm fully convinced that he will be capable of the job. Not only does he have high proficiency in both Chinese and English, but he also equips himself with amiable character. Hence , he is bound to get along well with your eight-year-old son. Moreover,he has abundant experience as well as subtle tutoring techniques, which qualifies him to help your son make progress.If interested, feel free to contact him at 13967783179.I'd be grateful if you could consider my recommendation.牛刀小试假定你是李华,你校学生会将进行主席换届选举,请给负责学生会的格林先 生写一封英文信,推荐自己,内容包括：1 .性格特点；2.个人优势；3.希望获准。用合适的词填空：Dear Mr. Green