应用文精批精改9(课堂讲稿).docx

应用文精批精改9:求职信（课堂讲稿）题目展示：假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid. Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。Assisitants wantedValuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.Requirements attached： 1. Good at English. 2. Experienced priority.Contact us by e-mail： Englishtec 163. com.注意：1.短文词数100字左右；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；审题“三步走”一审文体：求职信二数要点:三个：英语好 有经验 增加要点：性格外向三.思时态与人称：时态f 一般现在时人称一第一人称学生作品展示：扬Tt治以万丁及,方WrSg桁波¾汝传二圳加立才血亡彳阳"力.履行以r网布必必仅nt传平nWb臣一血 Silvias.血CtaKE侬Es ;WiM30q±r虎;m疗曲的T:W协¾r卯阳"加n浦犷才向夕昉；工价硼ef"r为通施阿e第一段：1.注意下称呼,中老年英语培训机构招聘暑期兼职辅导员,所以称呼最好要用Dear DireetOr（主 任）.2.I, m Li Hua,a high school graduate.Informed that you, re recruiting for assistants responsible for services in class breaks,I, m writing to apply to be one of them. 基本修改:一My name is Li Hua, a high school graduate. I understand that you are currently seeking/recruiting assistants for services during class breaks, and I am writing to apply to join your team.一其它写法 2:Also, I have undertaken related volunteer work previously, providing me with a comprehensive understanding of my obligations.5.Additionally,my outgoing personality enables me to get on well with elderly people in the institution,as well as betterly learning students, needs during the break.as well as betterly learning 应该改为 as well as to better understand 9 与前面的 to get on well with 并列。一基本修改:AdditiOnaHy, my outgoing personality enables me to get along well with elderly people in the institution, as well as to better understand students* needs during breaks.一其它写法 1 1Furthermore, my outgoing personality helps me establish positive relationships with elderly people of the institution, and also allows me to gain greater insight into students* needs during breaks.一其它写法 2:MOreOVeh my outgoing personality allows me to build good relationships with elderly people in the institution and to better understand students* needs during breaks.第三段：6.1 sincerely hope that my application will meet with your approval.Anticipating your reply.这句话的语法和用词都没有任何明显错误，基本表达了作者的诚挚希望和期待.不过,如果想要使 表达更加得体和礼貌,可以进行一些改进。一其它写法 1 ： I sincerely hope that you will find my application satisfactory. Thank you for your time and consideration, and I eagerly await your response.一其它写法 2: I sincerely hope that my application meets with your approval. I greatly appreciate your time and consideration, and I eagerly await your response.Thanks to my excellent command of English, I feel confident in my ability to competently fulfill responsibilities that require fluent communication in the language. Also, I have undertaken related volunteer work previously, providing me with a comprehensive understanding of my obligations. Furthermore, my outgoing personality helps me establish positive relationships with elderly people of the institution, and also allows me to gain greater insight into students* needs during breaks.I sincerely hope that my application meets with your approval. I greatly appreciate your time and consideration, and I eagerly await your response.翻译练习：第一段:作为一名最近的高中毕业生，我想申请“课间服务助理”的职位。我相信，我的技能和热 情将成为您团队不可多得的财富。第二段：由于我对英语有着出色的掌握，我对需要流利沟通的工作职责有信心。此外，我之前曾从 事相关志愿工作，这使我对自己的职责有全面的了解。此外，我的外向性格有助于我与老年 人建立积极的关系，并让我更好地了解学生在休息时间的需求。范文呈现：Dear Director,I, d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.I, ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I, m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Sincerely,Li Hua类似话题的拓展假设你是红星中学学生李华，你得知故宫正在招聘暑期义务英文讲解员，请你给相 关部门负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：L介绍你的基本信息；2.说明你的优势；3.表示你希望被录用。Dear Sir or Madam,I have learned that English volunteer guides for the Forbidden City are wanted in the summer vacation . I am writing to apply for this position .Itm a Senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School9and I believe I am qualified for the position.These years,I have been on several exchange programs in America9SO I am confident with my communication skills in English.What,s more,as a fan of Chinese ancient history, I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce the Forbidden City to foreign guests .I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration .Sincerely yours,Li HuaMKi琦T怩仅讦挑一曲#COrn脸疥的/方波Tffztmq&峭呢前 d而可咻出flHMilfaL VOturtecrwork 位k如优疗S¾力洲的那仃砧厂曲仞叶心愉/伪；用qp句丽彳空* *MA力彩：尻陀1洲/力T/犷而0g 谢汾.以济©柞即/：犷仍孑阴，湃7力泞; ¾灰空.根他尸©1的济济9如讹物4广他WHa"的 僚G方他曲 力OPgFhatm可事Pp£上斌OrrNiIt Yneetwtth *qour 明相锄”