雅思高分作文：专业较强的工作是否应该收入更高.docx

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1、雅思高分作文：专业较强的工作是否应该收入更高雅思大作文题目：Youshou1dspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Professiona1workers1ikedoctors,nursesandteachersmakeagreatercontributiontosocietyandsoshou1dbepaidmorethansportsandentertainmentpersona1ities.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswerandi

2、nc1udeanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexperience.Writeat1east250words.【话题分类】社会生活类【题目解析】题目大意：专业性较强的工作，如医生、护士和教师，对社会有更大的贡献，因此应当比运动员、娱乐明星收入更高。你是否同意这个观点？【难点】题目的课题具有较大的争议性，大部分同学都很难快速形成清晰的立场。如果题目只是简单的问专业较强的工作是否应该收入更高？或者运动员、娱乐明星是否收入过高了？，是比较容易回答的。但两者收入之间的比较，需要更多维度的考虑，要快速切入的话，同学们可以采用一边倒的思路，或者认为两者应该收

3、入平等。更容易展开。【写作思路】开头段：指出两种职业的收入差距现象，转述题目的观点，并表示个人赞同。主体第一段：论述专业工作对社会产生的价值与他们获得的认可之间的不均衡；通过几种典型职业举例说明。主体第二段：认可要想成为职业运动员和演艺明星确实需要付出很多的努力，也有一些人对社会做出了较大贡献。但大部分的人所获得的与他们的贡献不平衡，尤其是一些不尊重个人职业及公众的人。结尾段：强调这种收入差距的不合理，重申观点。【参考范文】Professiona1ath1etesandentertainmentce1ebritiesareoftenconsideredtobeoverpaid,andtheir

4、va1ueoverrated,especia11ywhencomparedwithpeop1eworkinginsomesocia11ysignificantprofessions,suchasmedica1andeducationfie1d.Somepeop1earguethatthe1attershou1dbepaidmore,becauseoftheircontributiontosociety.Ipersona11yagreeandbe1ievethattheaverageannua1earningofprofessiona1workersshou1dbehigherthanthato

5、fpeop1eworkinginsportsandshowbusiness.Itiseasytojustifywhyprofessiona1workersdeserveahighersa1aryat1arge.Taketeachingforexamp1e,whichisoneofthemosteconomica11yimportantoccupationsbecauseourfutureeconomyre1iesontheeducationoftheyouth,yetteachersarepaidastronomica11y1essthantheaverageprofessiona1ath1e

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7、nthesamerecognitionbysocietyasath1etesandentertainmentstars.Ihavetoacknow1edgethatbecomingprosinsportsandshowbusinessisnotaneasyquest,andthatittakesatremendousnumberofhoursofhardworkanddedicationtoearnajobinthesefie1ds.Itisa1soundeniab1ethatanumberofce1ebritieshavemadeuseoftheirfameandfortunetoinf1u

8、encethesocietyinapositiveway,provingtheirworthiness.However,a1argepercentageofsportsandentertainingstarsfai1tojustifythefameandfortuneunfair1ybestoweduponthem.Instead,manytakeitforgranted,over1ookingthefactthattheyarepub1icfigureswhosebehaviorsandbe1iefswou1dprojecttremendouspoweroverthepub1ic,espec

9、ia11ytheyounggeneration.Somegotoextremesorbecome1awbreakers,suchasusingi11ega1substances,inpursuitOffinancia1benefits.Tosumupztheincomedisparitybetweenprofessiona1workersandsportingandentertaining1egendsishard1yjustifiab1e.Whi1eadmittingthecontributionofaportionofthesefamousfigures,Ibe1ievemostofthe

10、mareoverpaidandpeop1ewhoworkinsocia11yimportantfie1dsneedtohavemorerecognitioninfinancia1terms.(378words)【语言积累】overpaidadj.收入过高的overratev.高估socia11ysignificantprofessions对社会有用的职业averageannua1earning平均年收入showbusiness演艺圈at1arge整体上地astronomica11y极其的，夸张的afractionof一小部分defendv.保护，防卫givetherecognition给予认可dedicationn.献身,投入WOrthineSSn.价值，值得bebestowedupon被给予takeitforgranted当作理所当然OVer1OOkV.忽视pub1icfigures公众人物projectpowerover对.产生影响gotoextremes走极端inpursuitof追求disparityn.差距infinancia1terms在经济方面