托福高分范文：运动和社交活动和学术活动一样重要.docx

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1、托福高分范文：运动和社交活动和学术活动一样重要是否同意这个结论：在大学，运动和社交活动和学术活动一样重要，大学应该给二者同样多的财政支持。这个题目注意两点：首先，题目的设定是在大学，如果以小学、中学为例就会偏题;第二，这个题目是对比题，问运动、社交和学术活动是否同样重要。如果我们认为二者都重要、也可以不选择一边倒，而选择平衡结构。托福写作文章框架1 .开头：同意，二者对学生的综合发展同样重要，所以大学都应该给钱。2 .论证段1：专业的学术教育和指导是学生在大学首要要得到的，因此大学应该在这里进行大量投资。3 .论证段2：同时，运动和社交活动对大学生的全面发展必不可少，同时这两方面也要求大学直接

2、投资。因此，在这方面大学也少不了要花钱。4 .结尾：同意，二者对学生的综合发展同样重要，所以大学都应该给钱。托福写作范文Whatstudentsrequirefromco11egeexperienceiscomprehensivebetterment,orspecifica11a11-aroundimprovementbeyondmereacademicandvocationa1exce11ence.Asaresu1t,everyaspectofthesociety,fromstudentsandparentstothegovernmentandeducatorsthemse1ves,have

3、beenurginguniversitiestore-examinehowtheycaninvest1imitedbudgetthemosteffective1y.Persona11y,Idisagreewiththosewhoprioritizeeitheroneofexpenditureonacademic1ifeofsportsandsocia1activitiesovertheother.Instead,Ibe1ievetheyareequa11yimportant,forthefo11owingreasons.Firstandforemost,itisexce11enceinacad

4、emicandvocationa1trainingthatstudentsseekatuniversities,inwhichaspecttheyhavedefinitiveadvantagesoveranyothermodesofeducation,suchasnightschoo1s,on1inetraining,andse1f-taughteducation.Tobemorespecific,itisqua1ifiedandwe11-recognizedprofessorsafterwhomstudentswishtostudy,itishigh1y-advancedandwe11-eq

5、uipped1abswheretheywishtoconductexperiments,anditisfierce1ycompetitiveyethigh1yrewardinginternshipopportunitiesthattheywishtoget,re1yingontheco11egesreputation,thequa1ityofitstraining,anditssocia1network.A11theabove-mentionedaspectsrequireconsistentinputandmaintenanceontheuniversity,spart.Takemyuniv

6、ersity,thehighestandmostreputab1einstituteinChina,forinstance.Tocontinua11yattractthebestandmostta1entedstudents,iton1yhiresthemosttriedandqua1ifiedprofessorsofthetime,payingdoub1eoreventrip1ingtheirsa1aries,comparedtootheruniversities,ontopofwhichitcarefu11ymaintainsaIntricate1absystem,buyingmoreeq

7、uipmentandmateria1sthanotheruniversities,andimprovingfaci1itieseverytwoorthreeyearseventhoughtheyare,bynomeans,outdated,justsothata11thestudentscou1dhavetheopportunitytousethe1atestinstrumentsshou1dtheywishit.Thus,itgoeswithoutsayingthat,eachyear;ouruniversityattractsthebestta1entfroma11overthecount

8、ry,ifnotAsia.Ontheotherhand,however,sportsandsocia1activitiesareequa11yimportantbecausetheycontributetoastudent,scomprehensivedeve1opment,and,perhapsmoreimportant1y,theyrequiredirectinputfromtheuniversities.Tobemorespecific,notwantingstudentstopurseacouch-potato,1ifesty1e,orgotoanyrandomp1aceforexer

9、cise,forsafetyorotherreasons,theuniversitymustinvestsubstantia11yinexercisingvenuesandequipment,whichmostuniversitiesinmycountrydo.Forexamp1e,thestandardoperationistohavea1argestadiumzwithwe11-maintainedtracks,footba11,andbaseba11fie1ds,agymthatoffersdiverseexerciseportunities,fromyogatohandba11,and

10、andaquaticcenter,a11ofwhichareopentostudentsfora1imitedfee.1ikewise,therearecertaintypesofsocia1activities,most1yindustry-re1ated,thatcou1don1ybenurturedonco11ege1eve1,so1ongasenoughisspentonthem.Forinstance,ouruniversitycarefu11ymaintainsanintricatea1umninetwork,organizinga11typesofreunionsandconfe

11、renceregu1ar1y,investingmi11ionseveryyear;justsothatgraduates-to-beeachyearcandebutinfrontofthecremedeIacremeoftheindustrfindingthemostdesirab1einternshippositionsfasterthananyotherstudentsfromanyotherco11eges.Thereisnodoubtthatsuchactivities,whichcannotbeobtainede1sewherebutinco11eges,areequa11yindispensab1eforstudents.Inconc1usion,itismyearnestbe1iefthatco11egesshou1dendeavourtoba1ancetheirinvestmentsinbothaspectsofstudents,1ives,academicaswe11associa1,astheyareequa11yessentia1toastudent,scomprehensivedeve1opment.