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1、七种提分的写作技巧1不要总是以有生命的名词或人称代词开头例1JPeop1eexperiencemanygreatchangesinthe1astha1fcentury.低分0verthe1astha1fcenturythepaceofchangeinthe1ifeofhumanbeingShasincreasedbeyondourwi1destexpectation.高分例2Studentsshou1dcertainiymakecontinuousefforts.低分ContinuouseffbrtsonthepartofstudentsarecertainIyrequired.高分技巧:找到
2、原句中的非生命的名词短语,把它变成主语。例3birthcontro1isquitenecessaryinChina.低分Itiswide1y/common1ythought/be1ieved/he1d/acceptedthatbirthcon1ro1isquitenecessaryinChina.高分技巧:使用主语从句。Manypeop1ethink=Itiswide1y/common1ythought/be1ieved/he1d/accepted.例4Moreandmorepeopieagree/rea1ize/areawarethatwornenshou1denjoyfu11equa1it
3、ywithmen.彳氐分Thereisagrowingagreemen1/rea1iZation/awarenessthatwomenshou1denjoyfu11equa1itywithmen.高分技巧:使用存在句Iherebe句型。Moreandmorepeop1eagreerea1izeareawarethat.=Thereisagrowingagreement/rea1ization/awarenessthat.例5ManyChinesepeop1ehavegonetotheUnitedstatesinthepast15years.低分Thepast15yearshavebroughm
4、anyChinesepeop1etotheUnitedStates.高分技巧:用时间词作主语。效果非常好。如:The1astha1fofthe20thcenturyhasseen/witnessedmanygreatbreakthroughsineveryaspect.1.英语中被动句的使用频率远远高于汉语。例1Theymakea1otofinnovationstomakemoneyfbrafewpeop1e.低分A1otofinnovationSaremadetowiththeaimofmakingmoneyforafewpeop1e.高分技巧:宾语变主语。例2WemayIhinkmoreo
5、fthee1der1ywhoIiveapartfromtheirchi1dren.低分Morethoughtmaybegiventothee1der1yWho1iveapartfromtheirchi1dren.高分技巧:动词变名词。2.不要总是用“假如”、“由于“、“当”等口语意味较重的句子;不要对动词过于依赖,要学会名词或介词结构来表达意思。例1EvenifyoubeIievechangeisinevitab1e,thisdoesnotmean“changeiSa1waysforthebe11er”.彳氐分However,reachingtheconc1usionIhaIChaneeise
6、vi1ab1eisnotthesameasassumingthattchangeisa1waysforthebetter,.高分技巧:使用同位语从句。例1IfyoUComDarebicyc1eswithcarscarefu11y,youwi11findbicyc1esaresuperiortocars.低分Carefu1comparisonofbicyc1eswithcarswi11showthesuperiorityoftheformeroverthe1atter.高分例2IfWeon1yapp1ybookknow1edge,wewi11notgetgoodresuIts.低分Theapp1
7、icationofbookknow1edgea1onewon,tbringyougoodresu1ts.高分例3IfwecanbetterUnderstandthegreaterpressureofthePopu1ationgrowth,wewi11haveacorrectattitudetowardsfami1yP1anning.低分Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopu1ationgrowthisessentia1toacorrectattitudetowardsfami1yp1anning.高分例4IfweareWatChingIoO
8、muchTV,ourreadingabi1itywi11beserious1yaffected.低分HeavyexposuretoTVwi11exertanegativeeffectonourreadingabi1ity.高分例5WhenawornanSeeSthatsheisgoingtobe1aidoff,shebeginstoworrya11dayandnight.低分ThemerePrOSDeCtOf1ay-offwou1dsetawomantoworrya11dayandnight.高分例6BecauseWeCannotapp1ybookknow1edgetopracticeweca
9、nnothand1erea1prob1emsinsOCiety.彳氐分Theinabi1iIytoapp1ybookknow1edgetopracticepreventedUSfromhand1ingrea1prob1emsinsociety.高分技巧:把动词改成名词。3 .不要总是用肯定句来表达,要学会用否认句来表达肯定的意思。例1EVeryyoungboyandgir1wantstoeama1ittIemoneytohe1Pcoverhigherco11egecost.低分Thereishard】yayoungboyandgidwhodoesnotwanttoearnaIico11egec
10、ost.高分111emoneytohe1pcover技巧:every=hard1y+not例2FOOdisthemostbasicissuetoindividua1andnationa1Surviva1.低分Noissueisasbasictoindividua1andnationa1surviVaI空food.高分技巧:最高级=notas.as例3Wheneveryoupickupanewspaper,youwi11findadvertisements.低分11isimpossib1etopickuPanewspaperwithoutfindingadvertisemerits.高分技巧:W
11、henever=impossib1ewithout4 .恰当使用排比、平行句。例4Iaminfavorofequa1rightsforwomen.Ithinkwomenshou1despecia11yhavetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequa1terms.Theyshou1dgetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob.Theyshou1da1sohaveequa1oortunitiesforpromotion.彳氐分Iaminfavorofequa1rightsforwomen,especia11ytherighttocompetew
12、ithmenforjobsonequa1terms,Iherighttogetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob,andtherighttohaveequa1opportunitiesforpromotion.分5 .使用同位语从句。例1First,mostpeopIewou1dagreethattheInternethasimprovedthewaywecommunicate.低分Firstofa11,itisanindisputab1efactthattheIntemethasrevo1utionizedthewaywecommunicate.高分6 .不要一个一个地
13、罗列句子,要学会用分词和从句把它们连起来。例Teenagersarepressuredbyschoo1work.Theyareencouragedbytheirpeers.UndersuehcircumStances,resorttosmoking.Thoughtheyee1aIittiegui1tySometimes.低分Pressuredbyschoo1workandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresor11osmoking,thoughfee1inga1itt1egui1tysometimes.高分2023年英语六级参考范文Certifica
14、teCrazeOneofthe1atestcrazesinChineseco1Iegesanduniversitiesisthedrivetogetmu1tip1ecertificatesinavarietyofareas.Whetheritsatrans1ationcertificate,adrivingcertificateoracertificateoracertificateinmathorscience,manystudentsho1dIheC)PiniOnthathavingextracertificateswi11he1pthemfindbe1terjobs.Thereasons
15、whystudentsprefertoacquirecertificatesarevarious.SomestudentsaredeSPerateforasmanycertificatesaspossib1emain1ybecauseofthegreatpressureoffindingagoodjob.ICVkthatdonothavemanyIhighIightS1canhardIystandout.C)Wingtothis,manystudentsexerttIhemse1vestoearncertificatessothattheycanbeattheircompetitorsinthejobmarket.Besides,someho1dthatprofessiona1certificatesareimportantSUPP1ementtotheirschoo1work.Throughsuccessfu11yobtainingvariouscertificates,studentScanprovetheirComPetenCeandgainse1fconfidence.Asforme,thoughwecannotdenytheabovebenefits,we,dbetternotjustjoiniheparadeandwaste