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1、高分应用文突破系列:建议信(上) PART 1建议信写作技巧 1.建议”逻辑建议信六件套:首段:情感背景+写作目的主体:具体建议+建议理由尾段:总结升华+期待祝愿 2 .建议”句式(2017年北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选 择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅 Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回 信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。首段:情感背景+写作目的构思：情节构思:了解到你们学校为你们提供了两条在中国的旅游线路,我非常高 兴。基础版：m very glad to know that your school offered

2、you two routes to travel in China.升级版：1 have received your letter in which you told me that your school offered you two routes to travel in China,which makes me very glad.升级版：收到你的亲信,信中，使我.。1 have received your letter in which . , which makes me .词汇升级好事 very totally/extremely/more thanhappy/glad deli

3、ghted/thrilled/exhilarated坏事 Very一 deeply/terribly sad /sorry depressed/upset得知这个暑假你要来中国旅游,我十分高兴。m to learn that you,re coming to tour in China this summervacation. (totally delighted)得知在这次暑期交流活动中您将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座,我满怀激 动。m to hear that you will give a lecture on western art duringthis summer exchange p

4、rogram. (extremely thrilled)得知你对中国文化感兴趣并计划明年来北京上大学,我十分高兴。m to learn that you are interested in Chinese culture and plan tocome to Beijing for university next year. (more than happy) 得知你在适应高中生活方面有困难,我感到非常难过。m to learn that you have trouble in adjusting yourself to the life in high school. (deeply sor

5、ry/really upset) (2019年天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑 期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师ChriS将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现 就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给ChriS写一封电子邮件: 1.你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)；2.选择该话题的 原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;3.希望从中有何收获。收到您的来信,信中您提到您将在这个暑期交流项目中做一个关于西方 艺术的讲座,这让我非常兴奋。1 have received your letter you mentioned thaton western a

6、rt during this summer exchange program,me feel totally excited.(in which;you would deliver a lecture;which makes)首段:情感背景+写作目的构思:这有一些给你的建议。/我想给你一些建议。基础版：Here is some advice for you.I would like to give you some / my advice.升级版：is my advice your journey in Chinawhich route to choose.(The following;for

7、;on)句式升级：以下是我就给出的一些/三个/我的建议。The following is several / three / my advice for. on.词汇升级advice(suggestions ;recommendations/tips/proposals)以下是我就你的未来教育计划,在学校选择和准备工作上的几条建议。 several recommendations for your future education plan.A. The following are;on choosing the university and preparationsB. The follow

8、ing is; on choosing the university and preparationsC. The following are;in choosing the university and preparationsD. The following is; in choosing the university and preparations 主体:具体建议+建议理由构思：我觉得泰山之旅更好。基础版：I think the journey to Mount Tai is better.升级版：Both of the routes are good,I would like tot

9、he journey to Mount Tai.(but;recommend)升级版:这两个/所有的.都很棒，但我想建议你.Both / all of. are good ， but I would like to recommend you .词汇升级“good (fascinating/fancy/fantastic) 主体:具体建议+建议理由构思：第一，第二，第三基础版：First(Iy), Second(Iy), Third(Iy).升级版：首 先 First of all/In the first place /First and foremost,(To begin/start w

10、ith)其次 BesidesWhat,s more/FurthermoreZMore thanthat/Additionally/In addition , . (Moreover)最后 Finally/UltimatelyIn the end/On top of that/Last but notleast,. (Eventually)一方面,另一方面For one thing,. For another,. / (On the one hand,. On the other hand) 主体:具体建议+建议理由构思:我建议你,因为.基础版：1 suggest that you should

11、,., because.升级版：J, it seems a for you to ., it that you should .(To begin with;good idea;Whats more;is strongly recommended)(2019年北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、 天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1.交通出行;2.必备衣物。构思：首先，你从北京开始似乎是个好主意。此外，强烈建议你带着夏 天的衣服和雨伞。升级版：To begin with, it seems a good idea for

12、 you to begin from Beijing.What,s more, it is strongly recommended that you should take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.建议句式升级版：It seems a good idea for you to .对你来说可能是个好主意It is strongly recommended that you should . 强烈建议你最好Sth. may be an ideal choice for you.对你来说可能是理想的选择It is of vital importa

13、nce to. for the reason that/due to the fact that 至关重要，国为构思：此外，提前下载各城市坐地铁和公交的软件似乎是个很棒的选择, 这能让你的旅程更加便利。In addition,for you to download the apps to take a bus and the subway for the cities in advance, your trip more convenient.A.it seems a great choice; which can makeB. it seems great choice; which can

14、 makeC. it seems a great choice; that can makeD. it seem great choice; that can make尾段:总结升华+期待祝愿构思:我希望我的建议能帮到你。最好的祝福送给你！基础版：1 hope my suggestions can help you. Best wishes to you!升级版：”1 would be delighted if my suggestions could help you. And I hopeyou can have fun in China.(more than;with all my he

15、art)词汇升级could help you(Would be helpful/beneficial/valuable to you)(2019年天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期 交流活动。活动期间，英方教师ChriS将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就 讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给ChriS写一封电子邮件： 1.你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)；2.选择该话题的 原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；3.希望从中有何收获。如果我的建议对您有益处，我将非常开心。衷心祝愿您的讲座取得圆满 成功。if my suggestions would be beneficial to you. And 1 hope your lecture will be a great success.(I would be more than delighted;with all my heart)全文欣赏：I have received y