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1、高分应用文突破系列:建议信(下)为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏 目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为WOrried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日 容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1 .词数120左右；2 .信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3 .信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪审题,找出得分点1 .来信背景:署名为WOrried来信求助,因为近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活

2、受到了影响。2 .不能直接给建议,要先表达理解同时安抚他的情绪。3 .提出你的建议同时要说明按照你这么做的好处。梳理结构与框架首段：回应对方的问题(需适当表达关怀与理解)-purpose中段：提出解决问题的建议一suggest ions尾段:表达希望或祝愿一hope对建议展开头脑风暴1 .talk to someone2.do some sports3.listen to music to make yourself relax4.remain optimistic词汇与句型准备1 .tipadvicesuggestion 建议2 .sorry to know that很抱歉听说3 .have

3、 trouble/difficulty in doing .做有困难4 .take one,s advice接受某人的建议5 .control your temper 控制你的情绪6 .recommend建议7 .take it easy 放轻松8.share happiness and sorrow with. 和同 甘共苦9 .remain optimistic 保持积极、愉悦10 .as follows 如下1 l.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来12 .find. helpfulusefulbeneficial 认为

4、有用13 .followtakeadopt one,s advice 采纳某人的建议14 .take sth. into account/consideration 才巴考虑在 内15 .with regard to 关于； 就16 . put forward 提出17 .share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事18 .with time going on 随着时间的推移19 . be faced with 面临20 .take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待词汇与句型准备1 .我很抱歉得知你现在过的很糟糕。(Im sorry to know that you, re

5、 having such a bad time at the moment.)2 .我很理解你现在的心情,没必要这么担心。(I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much.)3、和你信任的人谈谈你所面临的麻烦，这是一个很好的发泄你的愤怒而不伤害他人或自己的 方式。 （be faced with; which is a good way.）（Talk to someone you trust about the trouble you5re faced with,

6、which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.）4.拥有积极的生活态度有助于提升你的精神。（lift your spirits）（Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.）合理使用过渡词/句Firstly, to begin with, what,s more, however, in addition, last but not least, as far as

7、 I am concerned, In my opinion . Here are three useful tips.构思成文 ”Hi Worried,I,m sorry to know that you,re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no ne

8、ed to worry about it so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you,ll regret. Here are three useful tips.First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble you,re faced with, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hur

9、ting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you,ll soon

10、become calmer and better.Yours, 范文挖空背诵Hi Worried（我很抱歉听说）you,re having such a bad time（在这时 候）.The truth is that（每个人都会有一段这样的时刻）when things seem to be going wrong, I quite understand how（你现在的感受）and there is no need to （担忧）it so much. The important thing is to learn to（控制你的情绪）so that you may not do or s

11、ay anything you,ll regret.（以下是一些有用的建议）.（首先）,（和某些人聊聊）you trust about the trouble you,re faced with,（这是一种好的方式）of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to（摆脱愤怒）.（最后但同样重要的是），remain opt

12、imistic about your future.（保持积极向上的生活态度）towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you,ll soon become calmer and better.Yours, Jamie 补充范文：Hi Worried,m sorry to know that you,re having such a bad time at the moment. And m pleased to help you to solve the problem.plenty of homework, you

13、 may. As a result, you may get angry easily and have less patience. It our study. But it is common among our students. To solve it, you should know how to control yourself.Be confident. You are the best one. And never say give up. Try to be brave. Change the pressure into the power that pushes you t

14、o achieve your goals. Besides, don,t forget to keep smiling. Smile makes your life colorful and helps you pay attention to your study. Of course, you can ask your parents and teachers for. Never keep it a secret. You should share it with others;above all, they have much experience.I wait for your re

15、ply.Yours, Jamie（Faced with;have a bad temper;has a bad effect on;a favor;favorable）建议信常用句式积累开头段：1.1 know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。“2 .m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。3 .Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里有帮助你的一些建议。1. .Generally speaking, the . you offer are quite good, however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.（先扬后抑）总的来说，你提供的.非常好，但是我有一些建议希望你能采纳。5. A survey conducted recently among a group of people reveals that they are spending much