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1、如何用四五句话写一篇高分应用文应用文常见问题1.拿笔就写，没有框架2.天马行空/毫无头绪？3.作文里短句为主4.句子主语/结构单一应用文三段四句理论1 .第一段开头一句话2 .第二段正文两句话（文中开放或半开放的两个要点）3 .第三段结尾一句话案例分析假定你是高三学生李华。你的外教JaCk即将结束在中国的工作，离开你的学校。请 给英语老师JaCk写封信，表达对你的感谢。内容包括：L感谢的理由（可结合具体事例，如学习中经历的困难或取得的成绩）;2.表达真挚的感谢和祝福。审题“三步走” 一审文体:感谢信 二数要点:一感谢二祝福 三思时态与人称： 时态一 一般将来时（祝福）；一般过去时（事例） 人称

2、一第一人称（我）；第二人称（JaCk） 案例1Dear Jack,注意;不清楚对方是谁用 Dear sir/Sir or madam/Madam,第一段:写作背景+目的（应用文高分开头） your leaving before long,I,m writingto extend my thanks for the difference you made in mylife as my.Having learned about;inevitable;heartfelt;undeniable;mentor第二段正文:论点要少,拓展要深第一句：教学能力Over the course of three

3、 years, what has been in my memory is yourCIaSSeS（先抽象,笼统）,our interest in theEngliShWOrId （再进行进一步的具体描述；选取的点可以少，但要讲深讲透）.rooted;attractive;never failing to arouse;fascinating句子结构分析：l.over the course of three years 介词短语作状语2.what has been rooted in my memory is.名词性从句:主语从句3.never failing to .非谓语作状语词汇分析：L

4、attractivejasciiiatiiig作定语的两个近义形容词的替换2.rootarouse第二句：人格魅力Not to mention when I dilemma（背景 1） anddepression（背景 2），you were always there to me with（行为 1） and （行为 2 ） , whichwho I am now （结果）（对一个点要重点描写而非泛泛而谈，这样才能达到打动人 的效果,也即夸人要夸得具体才真诚）Was trapped in;drowned in;guide;endless patience;profbund wisdom;ult

5、imately shaped句子结构分析：1 .Not to mention起着连接两个并列要点的作用（逻辑连贯）2 .when I was trapped in dilemma时间状语从句3 .which ultimately shaped .非限制性定语从句4 .shaped who I am now名词性从句：宾语从句词汇分析：对称结构+形容词/副词1 .was trapped in and （was） drowned in两个对称的被动态（对称的写作手法可以让 句子变得规整，读来有节奏感）2 .endless patience and profound wisdom 又是两个对称的结构

6、3 .endless,profound9ultimately第三段:呼应话题+呼应文体（不能忘记展示漂亮句式和独特词汇）注意:LOOkilIg forward to your reply.套路式结尾,没有话题的针对性,更别提复杂句 式和高级词汇了,可以说是放弃式结尾,因为不能起加分的作用。to be frever5（话题是告别场景,常用回忆）,I wish you aWith those memories;engraved in my heart;lifetime health and happiness（呼应文体是感谢信，通过祝福表达感谢）.句子结构分析：With those memorie

7、s to be engraved in my heart for good,. with 复合结构词汇分析：be engraved infor goodifetime案例2Airbnb是一家联系旅行者和家有空房出租的房主的服务型网站。房主可以将-一个房间或整套 房子出租，旅行者可以短租一两日或长租几个月甚至一年。假定你是李华，你想成为该网站的会 员，将家中空房出租给旅行者。请用英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1.（介绍Airbnb）写信目的；2.出租优势；3.表达希望。审题“三步走”一审文体:申请信二数要点:三个，但正文要点应该是出租优势思时态与人称：时态一 一般现在时（介绍空房）人称T第一人称（

8、我）第一段:写作背景+目的（应用文高分开头）Dear SirZMadam5Airbnb is a website house-renting service toTravelers,Fm writing to amembership and rooms.（四句话并成一句话）Informed that;providing;in need;extend a sincere application for;rent out my spare 第二段正文：论点要少，拓展要深第一句：硬件area, my four-room houseround the Iake5 which is afor holid

9、ay makers.Located in the downtown;overlooks the picturesque landscape;tranquil;second-to-none choice第二句：软件Besides91 they will enjoywith my and（名 词对称）have ample faith that;homely warmth;hospitality;enthusiasm第三段:呼应话题+呼应文体（不能忘记展示漂亮句式和独特词汇）,you could consider my（呼应文体）and joining your（呼应话题）.Hopefully;ap

10、plication; earnestly anticipating; inspiring organization实战演练l:（21年6月浙江卷）昨天你去学校参观了一个中国画的展览,请你为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿：1.时间,地点2.你的感受；3.推荐观展。审题：文体:宣传稿I新闻稿话题:国画时态:过去式I现在完成式人称:第一人称/同学文章框架与思维重点标题（没有亦可）开头:活动简介一时间地点正文:活动内容（非要点的必要点）+你的感受结尾:推荐参考答案：As a highlight of the annual art week, an exhibition in the campus galler

11、y has been a CrOWdpuer （吸弓 I大量观众的事）with timeless glamour （永恒的魅力）of Chinese painting since June 4th.On the theme of Great ChiIIa,art lovers among students have created a wide collection of works, each showcasing the oriental beauty on rice paper （宣纸）. The event serves as the exploration of the charmi

12、ng traditional art pieces （艺术品）while encouraging the innovation （仓!新）of talented artists. No wonder everyone was drawn to the intriguing（有趣的）combination, me included.If you are into the modern look （面貌）of ink painting （水墨画/中国画），this is a show you can,t miss.标红的属于丰富的话题词汇;标蓝的为连贯的逻辑词;既是话题词汇也是逻辑词有： high

13、light,crowd-puller,innovation,combination,modem look实战演练2:假定你是李华,暑期在英国旅游时得到当地导游Mr.Smith的悉心照顾，回国后给他 写一封邮件表达谢意。主要内容：1.回忆旅行中美好时光；2遇到的困难和帮助；3.邀请他来中国旅游。 注意：1.词数8。左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。审题“三步走”审文体:感谢信数要点:一回忆美好时光二困难和帮助三邀请思时态与人称：时态f 一般现在时（邀请）；一般过去时（回忆/困难/帮助）人称f第一人称（我）常见问题套句太多，内容空洞，和题干关系不大英国/旅游/导游元素太少要点一:回忆旅行中美

14、好时光:导游+英国l.As a devoted fan （忠实粉丝）of British culture like me, nothing is more exhilarating than setting foot on （踏上）the historic scenic spots including Stonehenge under your detailed guidance and professional service, which surely expanded my first-hand knowledge of this western European country.2.W

15、hat stands out in my memory about the trip is a delightful visit to the Big Ben with your intimate company, immersing me in the unique charm of English glorious history and the exceptional ingenuity （卓越的创造力）of the British people.要点二:遇到的困难和帮助1 .Special mention should go to （特别值得一提的是）your timely assistance in communication with the locals which spared me the trouble of （省去. 的麻烦）finding decent accommodation and getting lost in complex transportation network typical of London.2.In addition, what rema