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1、读后续写：友情类Parti：经典例文（朋友和解）1Part2:友情类故事构造“三步法”5第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）5第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）6第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）7Part3:灵活应用8例L三位好朋友与读书俱乐部8例2：陌生地方的新友情11例3：结识到新朋友14例4：我们的友谊17Parti：经典例文（朋友和解）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。“Want to go to the pool tomorrow? Rosa asked Stephanie during recess. The po

2、ol at the YMCA was one of their favorite places, where they learnt and practiced swimming.Rosa and Stephanie did everything together. They rode the school bus together. They sat together during lunch. They took dance lessons together and they even went to the same summer camp. Their classmates calle

3、d them twins”. They were best friends. Most of the time.Sometimes, though, when Stephanie was with other friends, she ignored Rosa or treated her like a little kid, even though they were the same age. Rosa and Stephanie had played together since they were babies, but sometimes Stephanie didn,t act l

4、ike afriend.Today was one of those times.“Sorry. m already going to the pool,“ Stephanie said. Toni and Vanessa and I are going. She gave a broad smile, but in Rosa,s eyes, it wasn,t her nice smile.Saying nothing more, she walked straight away to join Toni and Vanessa, and Rosa was left standing alo

5、ne, with her face burned and an angry tension coming into her limbs.After school, at dance class, Stephanie talked and giggled with the other dancersThen she noticedas they stretched infront of the mirror.When Rosa came in,Stephanie didn,t sayhello to her, but justanother smile. Rosahesitated for a

6、whileabout whether sheshould join them, butshe still felt too upset.Kiara, the new girl.Rosa joined her and began stretching, too. Kiara smiled and Rosa smiled back. The two girls began to talk. Rosa discovered that Kiara was not the quiet girl she had thought she was. Kiara talked a lot - about her

7、 little brother, about the tree house her uncle had built and even about swimming. I love swimming, Kiara said. I will hold a pool part at the YMCA.Would you like to come? Yes. Its awesome. Rosa responded. She tried not to check the mirror to see if Stephanie had noticed. She hoped Stephanie felt le

8、ft out.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After the dance class, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat.When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits, her heart sank.【参考答案】After the dance lesson, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat. Seeing Ro

9、sa, Stephanie quickly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her. But Rosa walked past and slid into the empty seat next to Kiara. They were talking about the pool party when Stephanie went over. Do you still want to go swimming tonight? Stephanie asked. Tm already going,“ she said without

10、 looking up. Kiara and I are going together, Rosa smiled. Stephanie nodded and looked at her feet.舞蹈课结束后，罗莎上车时，斯蒂芬妮在他们通常的座位上等着。看到罗莎，斯 蒂芬妮迅速把背包从座位上移下来，为她腾出空间。但罗莎走了过去，滑进了基 亚拉旁边的空座位上。当斯蒂芬妮过去的时候，他们正在谈论泳池派对。“你今 晚还想去游泳吗？.斯蒂芬妮问。“我已经要走了，”她没有抬起头来地说。“基 亚拉和我要一起去了。”罗莎笑着说。斯蒂芬妮点了点头，看着她的脚。When Rosa saw Stephanie i

11、n low spirits, her heart sank. Getting even didn,t feel the way she had expected. She could walk away with her new friend and not look back. But when she saw Stephanies watery eyes, her heart beat painfully. nMaybe we could all go together. Rosa said. Stephanie,s face lit up. Tm sorry for ignoring y

12、ou. Thank you for your tolerance. Stephanie said. Rosa gave her a hug and said, I was too sensitive. Thank you for your tolerance, too. The two girls smiled at each other, which was their nice smile.罗莎看到斯蒂芬妮情绪低落，心沉了。甚至没有像她预期的那样感觉到。她 可以和她的新朋友一起走开，而不是回头看。但当她看到斯蒂芬妮流泪时，她的 心痛苦地跳动着。“也许我们都可以一起去。”罗莎说。斯蒂芬妮的脸

13、亮了起来。 “我很抱歉忽视了你。谢谢你的宽容。”斯蒂芬妮说。罗莎给了她一个拥抱，并对 她说：“我太敏感了。也感谢你的宽容。两个女孩互相微笑，这是她们美好的微 笑。【分析】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 RoSa和StePhanie是从小到大的好朋友，但有时 Stephanie表现得不像朋友，有一天Rosa问Stephanie要不要一起去基督教青年 会的游泳池游泳，StePhanie说她去过了就不去了，这让ROSa很尴尬；之后在舞 蹈课上ROSa结识了新来的女孩Kiara, ROSa邀请Kiara一起去游泳，想以此来报 复 Stephanieo【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“舞蹈课结束

14、后，RoSa登上公共汽车时，StePhanie正在她们 平常的座位上等着。“可知，第一段可描写StePhanie为ROSa腾位置，但ROSa并 未坐在Stephanie身旁，而是与Kiara坐在了一起，Stephanie问Rosa还去不去游 泳，Rosa说她和Kiara 一起去，Stephanie很失落。由第二段首句内容“当RoSa看到StePhanie情绪低落时，她的心一沉。”可知， 第二段可描写看到失落的Stephanie, Rosa并没有报复的快感,Rosa邀请Stephanie 一起去游泳，最后两个女孩和解，露出美丽的笑容。2 .续写线索：座位问话失落释然和好笑容3 .词汇激活行为类迅

15、速移开背包：quickly moved her backpack off / swiftly moved her backpack off 走过去： went over / walked over不回头：not look back / not turn her head情绪类心跳得很痛苦：beat painfully / beat bitterly露出喜色：lit up / brightened up【点睛】高分句型 1. Seeing RoSa, Stephanie quickly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her.（用

16、了现在分词短语作状语）高分句型 2. The two girls smiled at each other, WhiCh WaS their IliCe smile.（用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）Part2:友情类故事构造“三步法”第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）1、内疚1.被愧疚感压得喘不过气 步走向Fahad,“我在那边捡 的。Overwhelmed by guilt picked up the wallet andover there, and I think it is来的ASad迅速捡起钱包，大 到的，我想这是你 （充满内疚），Asad quickly strode to